School punishment

Honestly, I would say this is a strong first attempt, quick, easy practice, and good 3d work. The thing I want to recommend for the future is obviously to keep getting better at the game-making aspect, but also to use something like Grammarly to improve your spelling and grammar. There are a lot of simple writing errors in this game, and they aren't an issue, but if you try a bigger project, it'll be a little bit annoying to go back and fix tons of errors later.